DnB New to DNB Forum - 1st Track in a good while

[Brutalist]

Hi All,

This is my first track in a while; a WIP & un-mastered, without the added benefit of monitor speakers so any feedback would be appreciated.

https://soundcloud.com/brutalist-2%2Fbrutalism-soundcloud-edit

 

[IV4]

Well you sound new to this. You have all the creativity and flow of a new artist, but none of the science of a guy who has been at this to long. I say this is a great track but your mixing skills are poor. Try to find a track that you want to create and use some sort of reference to try and mix. I hope this helps.
IV4

 

[Brutalist]

Cheers for the advice IV4; I'll keep it in mind going forward. Thanks again

 

[TinnitusD&B]

Yeah it reminds me of when i first started. Just keep churning out tracks the best you can and the more you do the better the mix downs and production value will increase. Just keep at it man, the only way is up!

https://soundcloud.com/tinnitusdnb%2Fprotracted