new techsteppy/jumpish tune. " domination"

rob_del_terror

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definitely need to do something about that bass. if you cant be arsed sidechaining just eq your kick and bass seperately and have a play around to see if you can improve on it.

also needs some variation. gets a little tedious by 5 minutes. try at least some different drum patterns or something, maybe a little extra percussion as the drums are quite bare anyway.
 

richie_stix

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yes man... i like this concept even though it could do with some polishing! i think the bass is fine, you just need to get your percussion and fx to cut through more! and the sample needs to be abit less loud but slightly more dramatic!
 

msmith222

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the intro sounds good, might use a few fx or something. i think the cut to the "dominated " vocal sounded cool, and the bass is alright. it definitely needs some variety in the sequencing, and the whole thing could use some filling out, maybe more drums? sounds pretty good though man.
 
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