It's very minimal; I like that. I do think you could have built up a bit more of an intro. I like the voice coming in at :30ish (kinda buzzing noise) but it's too faint; maybe you could bring up part of it with EQ. I felt like you lost energy a bit in the middle (1:10 or so), but it was cool when you did get to the breakdown. Getting back up at 1:30 was cool; you have more than enough room for an extra voice, especially in the high range. Not a criticism so must as a suggestion/option, I guess. Still, great start.
