New Soulful Liquid track.

[JMDJ]

Hey guys! new track here! spent alot of time on this 1 getting anything perfect and that so feedback much much appreciated.

http://www.dnbshare.com/download/WantToBe-JAYEM_1.mp3.html

Want To Be - JAYEM

 

[kama]

Soulful? Liquid?

My kind of thing, yes!

 

[kama]

And yeah man I like it! Not so soulful as it is much more dancefloor material than something I'd listen at home, feeling reefer and watching a sunset.

Very crisp quality to it, maybe clippish even, are you sure you're not going red on the meters....? Good arrangement and I hava to complement you on getting it loud, but to be honest I think it's a bit too loud for me, pumping like it's coming throug radio.

Good ideas but I'm not sure I'm a fan of this kind of mixdown.

 

[JMDJ]

hey man. thanks for the feedback. nah the meters are peaking yellow. i did find it very hard to get the bass coming through with such depth without it sounded distorted but i must remind you, im no professional so stuff will be a lil scruffy but thats all part of learning cheers!

 

[kama]

hey man. thanks for the feedback. nah the meters are peaking yellow. i did find it very hard to get the bass coming through with such depth without it sounded distorted but i must remind you, im no professional so stuff will be a lil scruffy but thats all part of learning cheers!

Just remember that there is nothing wrong in pulling everything else down to make something stand out

 

[JMDJ]

hey man. your exactly right. liquids have got to be subtle. turned the bass down so the piano is more hearable. sounds nice. reuploading.

http://www.dnbshare.com/download/WantToBe-JAYEM_1.mp3.html

 

[JamesZero]

Cool tune mate, I really like the little vocal stabs and the melodys are nice.

Not 100% sure on the kick being used... it sometimes sounds a little punchy. Nothing wrong with that... just my taste really...

The sub bass could do with being bigger, the tune sounds like it needs fattening out.

The only other thing I can think of at the moment is that after the drop I think if you had less of an attack on the piano chords they would sit really nicely.

Over all tho I really like where your going with this. Would love to hear the final track.

 

[JMDJ]

safe man. i will get to work right away Will have it finished this week!

 

[kama]

The sub bass could do with being bigger, the tune sounds like it needs fattening out.

haha lol just the opposite to what i said!

Each to their own I guess...

What I said in my earlier post may seem a bit harsh, I liked the tune otherwise very much, just the mixdown was not up my backalley. Maybe I'll be arsed to listen to that other version in the near future.

 

[JMDJ]

baaaaah this tune is old. a test for the real shizz to come !