New Song: !ZOMG? - Transparent [Drum & Bass]

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  1. !ZOMG?

    !ZOMG? New Member

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    CHECK THIS OUT! !ZOMG? - Transparent [Liquid-ish Drum & Bass]

    Hey guys, here is the new tune :)

    It's not properly mastered or anything, hope you like it anyway :p

    Here is the link and be sure to check my other tunes out too: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Blu5wnYdwvM&feature=youtu.be

    Thanks in return and tell me what you think!

    // !ZOMG?
     
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  2. bulletstorm

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    well this is waaaaaaaaay better than your previous track =)
    I really like it!

    I don't like how suddenly the highhats are coming in, but that could be a style difference.
    and you could work on an better intro overall, the track just fades in sort of.
    your kick gives a really nice punch, but you should turn the volume down just a little.
     
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    !ZOMG? New Member

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    Well thanks to your feedback before, I improved some things. :p

    Yeah I noticed that the kick is a bit too loud, I also had some trouble layering the right sounds and compressing it.
    What do you think of the snare?

    And a rating out of 10 ? :p
     
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    well I don't do ratings because their highly subjective to which styles people prefer :p
    But If you work this track out and create a full length version with a decent intro and break
    and, also important, something people will remember about it, it can become a really good track.


    The snare is not really my kind of snare, it's a bit dull.
    overall the drums seem to be the bad side of the track, and the leads are the good side.
    I really like the keyboard in the background.

    ---------- Post added at 19:30 ---------- Previous post was at 19:20 ----------

    btw, you should make a soundcloud page =p
     
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    Thanks for the tips/feedback bro! Really appreciated it :)

    *Starting to work on another track*...

    And yes, I will make a SoundCloud page sooner or later :)
     
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    Agreed on the intro, it needs something more catchy and interesting, some breaks, and a bit of variation in the melodies/arrangements for the 2nd part.
    as said bulletstorm :with polishing it could become a pretty good track
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    The lead melody is good and will definitely make a good track. I reckon you don't need so much power in the kick and snare, go for more rolling liquid beat maybe.
     
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    Great feedback! Thanks br0's.

    Btw, UKBreak has just uploaded/promoted my tune on his channel :) Check it out.