*NEW* Russian Roulette - Jay Walker

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by jay walker, May 14, 2004.

  1. jay walker

    jay walker 1/2 of Passive/Aggressive

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  2. Cube

    Cube www.exegene.com

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    downloaded this last night :D
    pretty damn good

    needs a lil bit more doing to it tho,
    all in all sounding pretty top notch,
    good work
     
  3. sdm

    sdm This is Dog Fort

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    Will take a listen when I get home (y)
     
  4. logikz

    logikz I Am Not The King Staff Member

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    i was writing feedback on the bass and synth and shit but im in a hurry so nevermind let me sum it up like this, its a good tune but you havent put nearly enough effort into it and released it anyway, calling it tounge in cheek. and as such its a good bit but you could probably spit something 400% better if you tried.
     
  5. Paradigm X

    Paradigm X Member

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    youve got a nice reese and 909 bass line and the wawh wah ones cool as well you should work on it and do something good with it the bass line gots potential but the drums need a bit of work imho. maybe layer a few breaks on top for the funkeeflow!

    schpec

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  6. jay walker

    jay walker 1/2 of Passive/Aggressive

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    Nice one Logikz & Paradigm - Im gonna go back to the drawing board this week, an will post the edit soon as! :cool:

    Will admit to rushing to get the audio up Logikz! :teeth:
     
  7. daky

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    Nice track layered bass sounds kool maybe sum eq issues but an all- round smasher good switchs at about 2:40...Weii done Jay! :banana:
     
  8. Time Dependant

    Time Dependant Jungle Hunter

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    Yes yes felling this one man best thing you've put together for a while now, that switch is defo tongue in cheek!!! Only critiscism's I've got our the drums do sound pretty quiet, try placing some eq onto the drums (you'll know where to find it), & it could do with some key changes in the switch. But damn good if I do say so!!! :who_wants
     
  9. dj rev-e

    dj rev-e aka Gangsta Fun

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    yo this tune iz nice! lemme get a copy jay! :]
     
  10. Bad Ace

    Bad Ace Close2Death

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    its ok i spose :p
     
  11. gpk

    gpk Great Pumpkin King

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    you cheeky monkey you didnt tell you made tunes. ill listen to it when im aroung a bettter connection. :alf: