im with chromey on this one, the bells sounds really wierd, i wanna say out of key, but its just the all round sound is a bit depressin, the whole tune is good as a basic idea just needs alot more work on bass n drums, plus as chromey said the clip is too short to really comment any more on, keep at it! i also think that theres too much reverb on everything, if ur gona be that drastic with reverb make sure the low end is taken out so it doesnt interfere.