new project ill say lol tiny tim xD

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by llSpaMll, May 12, 2009.

  1. llSpaMll

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  2. chromey

    chromey a.k.a Impact

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    Well; I'll be honest; I really dislike the muddy reverb on the 'tubular bells'.

    The bassline seems ok, but a little weak perhaps.
    Post a longer version and it should be easier to feedback on..
     
  3. Sammy Dexcell

    Sammy Dexcell Stop editing my profile Smarty!

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    im with chromey on this one, the bells sounds really wierd, i wanna say out of key, but its just the all round sound is a bit depressin, the whole tune is good as a basic idea just needs alot more work on bass n drums, plus as chromey said the clip is too short to really comment any more on, keep at it! i also think that theres too much reverb on everything, if ur gona be that drastic with reverb make sure the low end is taken out so it doesnt interfere.
     
  4. Dave Dexcell

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    Remove the intro completely man the bells just dont work no about of fx will change that, im sorry to say.

    the drums are nice need some high end layers in there, and the bass is good just as they said more changes in the riff.

    Still nice idea man keep at it!
     
  5. subprime

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    Those bells were murdered. The bass was ok, the drums were ok......only that.