new producer , want positive criticism and tips please ?

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by swaggasaurus, Feb 8, 2011.

  1. swaggasaurus

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    well, ive started out, and the only way im gunna get better, is if i get criticised, i dont need all my friends just saying its great , thats not going to get me anywhere, so can neutral people, tell me what ive done wrong and how to improve, make myself sound better, please dont just say, its shit, thats not helping me atall , i want to know why its shit, and what would make it better,
    thank you
     
  2. Overused

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    Don't know about wobbles in drum n bass man, the build up is good though.
    Also, the vocal starts te get on my nerves after a while :p
    Fucking love the underwater-bubbely-wobble sound, at 1.01 for example haha
     
  3. Nice

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    The drums sound kind of weak and I agree that the vocals get kind of annoying after awhile. I can't really help you past that, wobble basses aren't really my forte. :X

    Edit: by the vocals are annoying, I mean in the build from like 0:00-0:44 it's annoying. From 0:45-0:57 it fits really well for the drop, then after that in the main part of the song it doesn't really add much. Maybe try splicing the sample differently or just using it less. The other voice that says 'what the fuck' is cool though.
     
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