New Producer needs advice

[Critical3000]

Hi

Here are two of my dnb efforts, any feedback would be welcome

http://soundcloud.com/critical/dark-magician
http://soundcloud.com/critical/stonk


http://soundcloud.com/critical

 

[groelle]

basicly you should work on your drums. look up how to layer, read about eqing and compression and keep making tunes basicly