New Piece in Progress

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by the virtue, Oct 12, 2010.

  1. the virtue

    the virtue New Member

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    groelle Well-Known Member

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    perc needs to be more defined and i somehow think that pad is constantly playing the same note.
    bass needs some more defining aswell. really liking the snare tho.
    nice one.
     
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    im feeling the drum pattern, but just thinking that snare sounds too weak. but yeah this aint a bad tune either just didnt really like some of the sounds and samples that u used. i think some of the sound effects are too harsh in some frequencys, maybe over distorted?
     
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    yeh looking at it on some decent monitors at the mo so tidying but nice one :) will check out ur soundcloud bruv... peace

    and yeh i know some of the sounds a bit harsh... was feeling in a kinda harsh mood with the world ;) but will soften it up in the mix
     
  5. Protoplasym

    Protoplasym Nuskool

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    I like the darkness of it... instead of going into detail on how 'I prefer things to sound volume wise/etc', I'll simply suggest that you keep working at getting your volumes level.


    There are loads of tracks asking for feedback on this forum. I don't see your name in any of them.
     
  6. the virtue

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    yeh yeh just got signed up and need to make some effort... you will dude and cheers for the comment dude
    Ez