yeah but still... that guy goes for the little eminem dude and he like nah fuck you dick! obviously a mistake that decision, but he can walk around knowing that we can really only take the piss out of his haircut just now.
that was not very good. it is serious attempt at jamp ap isn't it? I recommend you take your synth swapping idea and develop it into symphonic proportions but instead of electro preset from massive and some granular lead use big distorted subs with square LFO edits and similar, you are onto something with that synth swapping technique. generally, this tune could improve in many many areas, so instead of going into that my advise to you would be to try and make fat distorted reeces and focus on that technique.
also, post in the correct forum next time or your thread will be deleted.