[NEW NICE TUNE] Ashley P - Times Time FEEDBACK PLEASE

[Djashleyp]

wrote this earlier

http://www.zshare.net/audio/624389887e667bfb/

feedback would be awesome

peace

 

[subprime]

You could take a bit off the drums that come in over the piano at the start. Maybe high pass them a bit or lower the level. Kinda let the instruments have their say first. Save that punch for the drop.
The main drums could do with a bit more shuffle/breakage behind them.
Maybe in the main section you could eq the piano a bit higher so it cuts through a bit.

Part from that I reckon it's pretty cool. If you add some pads and fx in there might fill it out.
Nice one.

 

[kama]

zshare dont work for some reason...

 

[co0ke]

locked...

i agree with the above, a more mellow kick would suit the intro, it sounds to hard compared to the snare imo. interesting melody, like it - sort of reminds me of final fantasy.
Get some breaks in there to try and ease of the rigidity!

 

[nexlab]

that melody is pretty sick but you definitly need to work on that drum loop. some build-up effects would fit in nicely too. i think its got alotta potential.