Drum & Bass New neurounk track preview [please feedback]

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by `ry4ndnb, Oct 26, 2012.

  1. `ry4ndnb

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    Not feeling the intro not really feeling much from the whole track but keep working on it!
     
  3. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    Oh man........you really need to work on all aspects of this track. Structure if way off, sound design leaves alot to be desired and the mixdown is quite honestly atrocious! Sorry.
     
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    Agree with what's been said. Sounds like its been recorded with a phone? Also sounds like your pretty new to it all. Some good idea's, you just need to work on the execution
     
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    Nucleoid Nucleoid Drum & Bass

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    The synths has some good ideas mate :)
    Though I gotta agree with the above, feel free to keep posting updates of the song tho, we might be able to help you get a sense of direction in this track ;)
     
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    u should learn how to use a compressor for the drums, and clean up the mud in the bass. i'm sure that with time u will succeed :)
     
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    Ok, the tune is almost done ;). New drums have been made, and I mixed it a bit, sound much better than previous one. Re-structurised the tune, maybe it`s still a bit repetitive, but today I haven`t more time to work with this...
    http://soundcloud.com/ry4ndnb/ry4n-calling-v-2
     
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    Anyone? (up)