New more upbeat Hip Hop tune

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I think its pretty cool man, i think its lacking other elements to carry it tho. Are you gonna be adding more instruments to this tune?
 

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Man. That bass sounds like it's clipped to hell and back. Maybe it's just when it doubles with the kick. Sounds a bit distorted anyway.
As an idea it's ok. Not much of a track.
Where's the rest of it?
 

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Hi Brofski,

first of all, absolutely love the "gritiness" of the track. But for the first time in a long time, instead of asking producers to add more "grit" to their tracks - which tend to sound slightly too "clinical", I think that your track might benefit from clearing a few frequences here and there. Love the clipped bass- but more variation would have more of an impact... i.e. reducing the wet/dry effect of your fx in the bassline...

Other than that, good job mate :)
 

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I think its pretty cool man, i think its lacking other elements to carry it tho. Are you gonna be adding more instruments to this tune?
Yeh, I'll add more to it and do a few changes.

Man. That bass sounds like it's clipped to hell and back. Maybe it's just when it doubles with the kick. Sounds a bit distorted anyway.
As an idea it's ok. Not much of a track.
Where's the rest of it?
Yeh, I see what you mean. It's only a snippet. No point making 4 minutes of the same beat over and over.

Hi Brofski,

first of all, absolutely love the "gritiness" of the track. But for the first time in a long time, instead of asking producers to add more "grit" to their tracks - which tend to sound slightly too "clinical", I think that your track might benefit from clearing a few frequences here and there. Love the clipped bass- but more variation would have more of an impact... i.e. reducing the wet/dry effect of your fx in the bassline...

Other than that, good job mate :)
Yeh, I will change it up a bit and play around with the bass a bit more.
 
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big mate. Real well made. Interesting cos when I heard the stabs on their own I predicted a completely different sort of beat and tune, then the hi hat came in and threw me off a bit. Not quite my sort of hip hop but its well done for sure.
Will sound sick with an MC.


I think when the hi hats come in on their own they need to be funkier. More variation of the velocities, bit more swing and a few more open hats in there.

Good work brof.
 
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