New minimal(ish) tune in progress - thoughts?

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  1. Crocodile

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    For a wip that sounds good.
    The kick sounded a tad loud. Apart from that not much to offer.
     
  3. Crocodile

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    Yeh I thought that about the kick drum actually... Need to sort that out. Cheers.
     
  4. BeaTTender

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    Once it drops it's got a nice feel to it. Maybe the intro is a bit long?

    There are some synth/interference type sounds in there along with something that sounds like rim shot with a lot of reverb. Sounds good!
     
  5. ENGINEEM

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    i loved the bass here, and i think you should make the synth which starts at 1:29 a bit edgy. atmosphere is great, ofcourse more deepness in it would make it even better.

    here ya go! good luck!
     
  6. Crocodile

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    Nice one for the feedback. Engineem - yeh I know what you mean. I wanna try and get that bass to be a bit deeper....
     
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    Lucidproduction i aint fraid of no ghosts

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    feeling this man im really happy alot of people are doing experimental/ minimal tunes...

    just to give u a fresh perspectiv from someone who trys to write a similar style of tunes,

    i think some really light reverbd drums in the background will fill this tune out very very nicely,
    and a few extra sound effects (woosh noises and such) will take the beat to a new level, say every 16/32 bars whatever...

    i really like this tune, pad is amazingly soft and the beat is crispy. good work mate
     
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    I like the sudden stops, they're nice.

    Good WIP.
     
  9. Crocodile

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    Thanks for the thoughts guys! Yeh, it is pretty experimental stuff - usually make more liquidy tracks, but started doing a few of these kinda projects in the past few weeks or so...
     
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    nice tune (y) need more bassssssssssssssss!!
     
  11. Delinquent

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    You guys always say that :(
     
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    edit: accidental double
     
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  13. Crocodile

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    haha yeh I know delinquent. I think its just bass junkies not gettin enough of what they want! I've fiddled with the bass a bit to make a bit more prominent, but I didnt hugely think it was an issue in the first place...