New Liquid tune

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Simm3r, May 20, 2008.

  1. Simm3r

    Simm3r Gonna shmoke a bowl

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    ez guys i jus finished a new tune called Too Much, not completely finished yet so if anyone has something to say about it i would be grateful.
    cheers
     
  2. Bay

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    yeh man feeling your tune! drums are nice, good structure aswell.
    but personally i think it sounds a bit wierd when the bass starts a bar after. like the little melody about 2.00mins. overall good tune liquid tune.

    easy mate
     
  3. Simm3r

    Simm3r Gonna shmoke a bowl

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    shit maybe i exported it with some audio in the wrong place, i do love to do that like a crackhead, thanks man i will check that now!
     
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    vickvega Mr. Blonde

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    very smooth melody -all your elements werk well but sounds like your drums go down in volume after the drop
    they really hide behind everything else
    are you compressing the whole tune ?
     
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    yea vick right lil wrk on the drop and would b rl nice

    like it tho very impressd good job brah
     
  6. Simm3r

    Simm3r Gonna shmoke a bowl

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    naa ive never thought about doing anything to the whole tune yet, what would tht do specifically? jus keep everything level?
     
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    toxysweden what do these knobs do?

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    contents n construction r wicked but,,,,,,

    hope u dont take this the wrong way no disrespect m8 you need to bring them drums forward they sit in the background all the way through the track and thats a shame cause the energy this choon really has is not being expressed !
     
  8. Simm3r

    Simm3r Gonna shmoke a bowl

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    yeh thanks man thats what i need to hear, ill see what i can do to it and then post it back up.

    thanks for the feedback guys
     
  9. second opinion

    second opinion bacon sarnies hmmmm

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    yes mate had a quick gander at all your tunes l really liked 5 out of the 6 but you need to beef up the drums seriously they do sit in the background too much.
    beef your kicks up and make your snares a bit snappier with a clap layerd into them requiem is really really nice rminds me of artificial intelligence stuff so crank those beats up
     
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    second opinion bacon sarnies hmmmm

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    yes mate had a quick gander at all your tunes l really liked 5 out of the 6 but you need to beef up the drums seriously they do sit in the background too much.
    beef your kicks up and make your snares a bit snappier with a clap layerd into them requiem is really really nice reminds me of artificial intelligence stuff so crank those beats up
     
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    second opinion bacon sarnies hmmmm

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  12. Simm3r

    Simm3r Gonna shmoke a bowl

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    yeh thnks man ill try to address this in my tunes, much respect to you guys