New liquid tune

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Sweaty Teddy, Oct 2, 2012.

  1. Sweaty Teddy

    Sweaty Teddy Nob'ed

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    Interested in what people think of the mix down is like, pretty happy with song arrangment but any feeedback is appreciated.

     
  2. pattycake

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    Its sounding good but a bit repetitious, I think modulation is needed in a track like this. probably go up to a happy key at some point, however you probably could make it work as it is now with just a bit more variation. Maybe another instrument that really stands out and brings some life to the second half. I also need to get more creative with my productions. Throw me back some feedback if you get a chance :D
     
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    horace111 My name is Jago (HYQXYZ)

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    quite nice, love the guitar like samples and the drums, could use some more bass though :)
     
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    Really nice sounds man, I can deal with the repetitive nature of dnb. that sits fine with me.
    The bass has some really nice hollow plucks to it. They seem to be more prevalent at the beginning of the bar than the end, like theyre softened out or something. I'd bring these out a bit more if I were making the tune myself.
    I'm no Hybrid Minds though, take what I say as unqualified. lol
     
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    Nice track, bit empty at main part though a nice flowing pad would do nicely filling it up and immediately bring that little bit variation in.
     
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    Cheers for the feedback guys, I've noticed that I need more variation but always struggle with ideas to vary it and make it sound decent, will see what i can do with switching up the 2nd half might try change up the guitar a bit.
     
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    nice track, like the drums especially. As has been said if at all possible for the 2nd part I'd change the riff completely or yep try to vary it a little.
     
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