NEW LIQUID TUNE

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by MARKLAR, Jan 14, 2011.

  1. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    pretty much the first liquid tune ive made
    quite happy with it so far
    still need bits doin
    all feedback is welcome
    cheers
     
  2. Rajstah Vibe

    Rajstah Vibe soundcloud.com/rajstah

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    First of all, i'm not really a huge fan of liquid, but still,as a drum'n bass man, i like it!
    So, the tune i think it's perfectly in style, it is unmastered yeah?!
    The sound of the drums it's a bit too over the general sound, and the sub it's not really coming out... that's the only issue i can ear on this track, basically need a mixing calibration..
    But as i said, it's perfectly in liquid style!!!
    Nice one!
    Peace!
    R.
     
  3. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    cheers mate
    yea its unmastered
    im also not a liquid person im more of a jump up guy thats probly why the drums sound a bit off!lol
    an im still in the process of sorting stuff out
    thats why i post for feedback
    cheers tho mate much apreciated
     
  4. Rajstah Vibe

    Rajstah Vibe soundcloud.com/rajstah

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    Yeah... i was going to say that was the reason why u were hitting the drum in da face!!!! lol :sixty_nin
    hehehe... perfectly clear!
    It is a challenge for u to make liquid?? :hagglers:
    Keep up with ur production!

    PS: how can i upload an avatar for my profile in this forum?
     
  5. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    yea liquid is a mission wen u love womps!haha
    i think u need either 1000 or 500 posts for an avatar
    but u can just stick ur thing in ur signature till then
     
  6. subprime

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    Yeah man, nice tune. Just the levels making it sound a bit clinical, I could imagine this sounding real lush and warm if you get the balance right.

    Wicked tune tho, like it.
     
  7. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    cheers mate ill see what i can do bout them levels
     
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  9. MARKLAR

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    cheers mate
     
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    i agree, the kick/snare are too loud in the mix, they overpower the melody a bit... otherwise, liking it.
     
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    Not bad:) dident really like the intro
     
  12. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    cheers guys
    yea intro could probly do with some work
    an the levels on the kick an snare do seem to be a bit overpowering
     
  13. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    Straight away I can tell that you are still writing your drums like it was a jump up tune. Not that thats a bad thing but I find the drumwork between the two genres are completely different. I like the string work in the build. But I cant tear myself away from those drums. You need alot more shuffles and rolling bits n pieces for liquid I think.

    Also some nice high pitched pads, coupled with a few subtle synth stabs would help this along nicely.

    Good effort though mate.
     
  14. IbbyDnB

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    yeah defo a small issue with the drums, but in jump up or dancefloor theyd go down a treat! i find EQing and compressing the kciks n snares from a break works well with liquid tunes, obviously still layering other breaks underthat etc. ALthough everything is else is sounding good, sub could do with been a bit louder or more powerful, i like this alot though. Keep it up!
     
  15. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    cheers for checkin
     
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    chromey a.k.a Impact

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    yeah can only agree about the mixdown being a bit off.. drums too loud- trumpets/horns way too mid range heavy...

    ideas are nice, but the engineering is off- but you know that already.
     
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    nice tune man, the break sounds like another track, its needs smooshing together with the beat some more... probably worth taking out the snippits of it you like rather than using the whole thing and using a bit more throughout the track!
     
  19. duttymonster

    duttymonster deep in the jungle

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    gave me the horn