NEW Liquid track!! SRM - "Drive u Babe"

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by fr00tyfr3sh, Jun 9, 2009.

  1. fr00tyfr3sh

    fr00tyfr3sh Member

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    Its the second one i produced myself so some feedback would be highly appreciated.
    Used FL Studio 8

    Still not been producing long with the program, but i am improving...
    Its called "Drive u Babe"

    ENjoy


    www.soundclick.com/srmbeats


    PcE

    SRM
     
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  2. fr00tyfr3sh

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    *State Self confessed VW nut

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    Thats the message i just got.....
     
  4. fr00tyfr3sh

    fr00tyfr3sh Member

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    try www.soundclick.com/fr00tyfr3sh if the other link is down.
     
  5. subprime

    subprime Dysjoint

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    I liked some bits of it. The area around the drop, before and after, needs some work I reckon. Didn't hear much really low bass after the drop.
    There were parts when the drums sounded pretty nice with the extra percussion you used.
    Not a big fan of the vocal, just personal taste.
     
  6. fr00tyfr3sh

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    YEah thanks for the reply. The vocal i got from a site where u can upload them urself, it was sounding much worse before haha. Yah I'll try to improve that drop area indeed.
     
  7. dolphinslovejaz

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    I actually like the vocals, there's a couple of parts where it sounds like you cut them out a little too soon though. Really like it at the end when you've got the vocals kinda over lapping. Sounds great imo. I think if you used a little panning (simple LRLR alternation) on each word it could sound really great.

    Keep it up.
     
  8. technic1210

    technic1210 ''VINYL VINYL VINYL''

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    i like it mate it's catchy,keep at it:rinsed:
     
  9. sati

    sati Code Monkey

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    keep banging out tunes man sounds like you just need to get more under you belt. where did you take the ostinato from? I can't quite place it
     
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    I LIKE IT REAL KICK BACK AND DRIVE TUNE. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
     
  11. ScottyEightSix

    ScottyEightSix HUGE EARS > COMEDY CHIN

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    Nice tune man really feeling it, like some said before needs more bass after the drop, also the vocals dont really work imo.
     
  12. Elektroshock

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    I think its cool.. the vocals could work.. i think maybe make them slightly cleaner? but all these comments are just opinions. a bit of sub somewhere might be nice too?
    Cool though
     
  13. fr00tyfr3sh

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    Yeah i've changed the beat a little now. Added extra bass in the drops, changed panning on the second group of vocals, and played a little with volume. Thanks for all the tips.

    Ser
     
  14. Crocodile

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    Alright mate. Some nice ideas there. I really like the guitar sample before the drop, and the little variation in the break you did. One thing I would say is maybe try and fill out the drums a bit - add a bit more percussion or something. Another thing I think would make the track sound better is if you work on the sub bass a bit more. Seems quite high at the moment, and I'm not sure if thats what you were going for....but a bit bass guitar-ish. If you were, then maybe try and eq it a bit better for a bit more of a strong low end. All in all though, some great ideas. With a bit of work this could turn out to be pretty good!
     
  15. fr00tyfr3sh

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    Yeah i understand what u mean with Bass-guitarish... its a program called boobass on FLstudio,i just recently found out how to create a good basssound with the 3xOsc, i will add the lower heavier bass and reupload soon.
    Thnx for the tips
     
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    musically its very good and catchy, if you had been producin a while and knew ur way around the software better this would be a very good tune indeed!
    just need to add more percussion,more layers of drums and yeh like u said some heavier bass.
    sounds good tho man!