NEW LIQUID TRACK (named after my daughter)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Dubsta, Jun 7, 2012.

  1. Dubsta

    Dubsta Well-Known Member

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    ez all.....my new track...ive named it after my daughter....i have a full length mastered version if anyone would like it.....this one on soundcloud is a unmastered 3min clip and un-signed.

    hope you enjoy.
    please leave any feedback in soundcloud...thanks

     
  2. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    Not bad.....reckon the bass could do with being a db or 2 louder, the drums kinda overpower everything.........not sure about the constant break in the drum beat every 8 bars or whatever it is.....think it's far too often. breaks like that are cool once or twice in a track, but to me I think in this track, it stops the listener from being pulled into the rythym.
     
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    I agree the bass could come up a touch dude. Nice tune though, I am quite feeling it. Liking the vocals! :)

    I am gunna do something really, really picky here and sorry if it was intended. But that reverse cymbal at the start, is there supposed to be a gap? I would have let that rise straight into my beat! But if that was intended buddy fair play!

    Also, sorry to sound picky again, "You off your fuckin naaatttt" ain't quite a liquid sample!?

    Haha sorry for picking on stupid little elements, but nice tune man, I did like it! Smooth vibes
     
  4. Dubsta

    Dubsta Well-Known Member

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    thanks for the feedback guys........the thingd youve said are exactly what i had in my mind too...the sample "ray winston"....i had knocking about and threw it in after listening to jrumhands "jrag" track and thought he used a clint eastwood sample in a liquid track and it worked....i tried something similar and it didnt lol....the filter at each break is a bit too much...these things i can easily change......ill post a re-edited version once im happy with it.......oh and the whoose at the start i got to admit i rushed that bit just s i could post the track
     
  5. IV4

    IV4 Currently a newt.

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    My kids are my muse too.
    I think you need to fill in some of your breaks. I also think your drums could use some more variety. What happens at 2:17 everything gets a little fuller? I think this song needs work but has good potential.
     
  6. Rezenate

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    Like others have said that pause every 4 bars totally ruins the flow so maybe try using some alternate sounds to take away that silence, Oh and I could't spot your daughters name straight away so naturally assummed her name was 'Unsigned' :lol::

    If your into playing with vocals within tracks then try and record some words by your daughter and see how you can manipulate and fit them into one of your tracks. I did this in the last dnbforum comp and my little boy loved hearing it back :).
     
  7. Dubsta

    Dubsta Well-Known Member

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    Wicked feedback...actually had some interest from a label yesturday.....want to sign this after I've made them edits...they've basically said if I do a few changes they will sign it.