New Liquid Dnb Tune

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  1. Conrad

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  2. Lucidproduction

    Lucidproduction i aint fraid of no ghosts

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    use reason much =p


    the melodys cool man, it wud be a very good drop aswell but just if u just had different drum samples, u just need a more punchy snare and kick atleast rly.

    wud be a really good drop tho tbh! nice work mate! keep gwanin
     
  3. Conrad

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    hahaha yeah i just got a copy back after about a 3 month absence of production so i just cained it for a few days.

    Thanks for the feedback anyway, I think i might of compressed the drums a bit too much tbh. they were pretty phat to begin with.
     
  4. Conrad

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    more feedback? its proper dead in this forum.
     
  5. D-Tektiv

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    Flows along nice..it'll probably sound redundant comin' from me, but I always hear vocal sample possibilities when i'm hearin' tracks..also maybe some more percussion in some parts..keep at it..pz & respect to ya
     
  6. djlfusion

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    nice little melody u gt goin on, i lyk!! but ur bass drum n snare, especially ur snare needs sum major beefin up but overall i lyk. gud work.
    iv got an unfinishd liquid track in my player called 'Highs & Lows' check it out if u get chance!!!

    www.myspace.com/djlfusion1
     
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    Cheers broski, working on it as we speak, Ill feed your liquid track in a bit!
     
  8. Conrad

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    How is it now? production wise.
     
  9. Simm3r

    Simm3r Gonna shmoke a bowl

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    yeh man well nice start, love tht startin drum fill, bin lookin for one like tht. i see what you mean bout the kik an snare, way too compressed i think. needs some splash like a clap on it or something as well. likin the melody an bassline on this one, but you seriously need more drum layers in there, like add in a couple of drum an bass breaks, danny byrd sample pack is good fot tht. and then keep workin on tht melody varying it ever 4 or 8 bars to keep it interesting. keep it up bro!
     
  10. fr00tyfr3sh

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    YEah , i liked the melody man, but just like Simmer said. Try to add a little variation in the melody, even if its only small, maybe add a instrument or whatsoever. And i would add another kick to the project and an additional snare.
    Nice work though, feelin that tune :)
     
  11. fr00tyfr3sh

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    YEah , i liked the melody man, but just like Simmer said. Try to add a little variation in the melody, even if its only small, maybe add a instrument or whatsoever. And i would add another kick to the project and an additional snare.
    Nice work though, feelin that tune :)
     
  12. subprime

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    Like they said really. Pretty cool as a basic structure to start adding to. As for the mixing etc it sounded like a good party going on next door to be honest, I can hear it but I can't feel it. Have you listened to any of simm3r's stuff? It's pretty good imho for that side of things. Peace.