certainly catches my ear, there is a possibility of something being out of key that comes in at 23s , can't place it though, maybe the pad or that piano tinkle. Hi-hat is a touch rough, wonder if smoothing that out will sound sweeter. Snare might sound sweeter with some extra bite/snap. Once drops sounds great with the vocal. Piano following bass note for note, maybe add some short notes into the bass riff to help it roll along. Sorry to rattle on, its a really sweet effort, good mixdown.