Listen to D.O.T - Love Jah *tester* by Derelicts of Tomorrow #np on #SoundCloud
p.s. this was played live by Bizzy B last weekend
fuck yeah bro nice one. You're setting a good example for others wanting feedback good job my dude! I'm at work right now but will give your tunes a listen and review later today when I get homeI left feedback,
"Epic, that Pad/Lead/thing sounds kind of like a String on steroids in the Intro, I love it! The slow attack on it and having it '''whoosh''' in like that is cool. Drop = YEEEEEES!!!!!! I like it a lot. The vocal in the Intro leading into the 1 was spot on imo. The cutup Drumloop is sick, I love your Editwork, jam! My only gripe is that I think the Snare could use another layer in the 2-500 hz range to fatten it up a little bit. The extra hat at 2:13 is cool, but very similar to the Hatwork that was already taking place... perhaps pan that layer to the left or right to give it a bit of seperation from your other Hats? There's that cool Pad/Lead/Brass sounding element at 2:50ish leading into the Breakdown, I love that sound. 2:57 - cool Fill, neat triplet type edit. I think the poppy KD is punching through the Mix well. Jammmin', my man."
thanks man, put a lot of effort into the breaks. I turned them down a bit because I felt they were too loud but it seems as if i've taken away from their punch. I feel you about the vocals but hey... it's jungle I'll have to take a look at the bass issue you mentioned. Thanks so much for the feedback brother!the breaks are sick. i'm not a big fan of the ragga samples. i think they've been done to death but that's just personal preference. my main problem is with the bass and low mids. i hear 2 bass notes throughout. the first one sounds like it has a higher layer on it. or is that the filter opening and closing? anyway the second one sounds perfect but the first one seems off to me. it clashes with the kick and sounds a bit boxxy. i'd eq out a notch around 100-200hz. also the whole thing sounds over compressed. it's a sick tune. don't get me wrong. i'm just trying to give constructive criticism
fuck yeah bro nice one. You're setting a good example for others wanting feedback good job my dude! I'm at work right now but will give your tunes a listen and review later today when I get home