I think you have made some nice FX and there is lots of variation in them but they are all a bit loud compared to the drums. Yo should add some automation and fills to create more structure to the track. I think your drum patterns are cool but the drums themselves are a bit weak. The bass sounds nice and reminds me of Jammin. 8 minutes is quite long I think you were high when you made this you could make some nice breaks or psytrance rather than call it jungle drum and bass breakbeats because lots of people know those as seperate genres.