synth needs to be louder on intro, BREAKS layered under your drums is a must, lots of work needs to be done on drums. main bassline a little too loud.
think about trying to get every sound in the mix to be heard as clear as the next, within reason, u also need to eq, all of yor sounds so that they each hav their own space in the mix. i.e kick drums at 100 hz, snare around 200hz, sub below 100hz, things like tht, gettin a gud mix is like 80-90% of makin a gud dnb track, so it needs to be right, keep at it mate!!!!! big ups
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