sounds alrite mate but theres a really nasty hiss on the bass line not sure if its soundcloud quality thats doin it
once u sort that out itll be much better
the beats sounding quite nice tho an the effects are cool
just need to work on ur bass mate
needs a better mixdown, that bass is SO LOUD in the mix, CHURN IT DOWN PLLZZZZ!!! OMGGG!!! the snare is hitting in a very low freq which to me doesn't fit in this song because the bass is right in these freqs too except when bit crushed, but still in there too.
And your snare is too stereo, but your bass. I think the other way around might/should work. Snare mono, bass wide stereo.