NEW JUMP UP TUNE CALLED PAYBACK TIME

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by MARKLAR, Jul 29, 2010.

  1. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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  2. richie_stix

    richie_stix gomby plz

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    saw this come up of fb... it's like how that other tune that 'didnt do anything' should have sounded!

    like the switch up drums mate... least i think they switched up? at 1.05 or so...

    i reckons for a bit of variety you want the wobble to roll all the way through the riff and miss out the stabs at the end? would come in well at 1.05 actually...
     
  3. groelle

    groelle Well-Known Member

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    liking the intro so far. comes in really nice, imo, that sample is class as well. dropped worked pretty good aswell, but i dont like that screechy sample at all, think you should go for a more subtle sound and fill the gaps with some fx maybe?

    drums are ok for a first draw, but i thought they could use some more compression.

    let us hear the finished version soon mate ;)
     
  4. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    I like it mate, I agree with Richie about letting the wobble roll through every so often
     
  5. RevTech

    RevTech Butthole=output transduce

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    I'd like to hear those drums punching more. Maybe work on the intro more. Oh but defo work this one out well, this has massive potential
     
  6. subprime

    subprime Dysjoint

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    Sounding good.

    At the moment you've just got a slight variation on that wa wa wa after 8 bars or something. Maybe that could be slightly different more often, either the notes or the sound.
     
  7. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    cheers guys ill see what i can do with it
     
  8. T Leaf

    T Leaf Neighbourhood Sickhead

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    i tagged the soundcloud but im in agreement i see the potential behind this one too! big sounds. :D
     
  9. deadaelus

    deadaelus Laughter in the Slaughter

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    Killer Cadence! Really cool sound in the mix.
     
  10. djmojo

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    Sounding good man. Our good friend Mr. Nukem puts this over the top. Nice 1.
     
  11. Kenneth4Eva

    Kenneth4Eva Let's Breed

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    hahaha thats awesome... i totally didnt see that wobble wobble coming after the second sample of duke nukem
    what programs do you use?
     
  12. muzzadj

    muzzadj POW!

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    you're best work yet for me, well best bassline anyway.. by far.. and im really liking those drums, keep working at this mate i would be well interested in a 320 :) Bigup mate!
     
  13. tr7 kid

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    feeling this track woooooooooo big ups
     
  14. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    cheers guys i still got bits to do to this wen my hangover gos away
    wen its done ill send u a 320 murray
     
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    muzzadj POW!

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    cheers mate!

    You mind checking the early stages of a tune ive got going? Not really sure where to go with the bassline so havn't done it yet, only a bit of sub! http://soundcloud.com/muzza/unnamedintro
     
  16. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    yea mate beats soundin nice an full mate id get rid of or change the kinda nursery rhyme sound on the intro tho.
    but the beat is sound proper nice
     
  17. Lasbike

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    Sounding good. Nice job. What software do you use ?
     
  18. tr7 kid

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    im hooked on this tune mate
     
  19. ARTFX

    ARTFX www.artfx-studios.com

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    Sounds pretty good man.
    Throw in some variation and some FX and fill up some of the empty spaces.
     
  20. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    cheers guys
    oh an i use reason 4 at those who were askin