new jump up track please feedback

[Smart-E]

hi i have just finished a new track would much appreciate some feedback.

https://soundcloud.com/dj-smart-e%2Fsmart-e-hide-and-seek-free-downloa

 

[Smart-E]

Is it that bad lol

 

[Mike Z]

No it's not. I personally think that the vocals stand out a bit from the rest of the music, and maybe it sounds a tad bit repetitive. But the energy is good!

 

[symbiosis]

Overall it sounds good, but I agree with Mike it's probably a bit repetitive. It would be good to change the bassline at 1:28 and then come back to the original bassline later. It's only 3:39 so adding new sections won't make it unbearably long.