NEW JUMP UP RIDDIM - MURDAH!

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by P!ker, Oct 10, 2008.

  1. P!ker

    P!ker Astrobass Recordingz HQ

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    Yo just finished my latest tune called Murdah.
    I would be greatful if you could check it out and leave me any feedback and sugguestions.

    http://www.myspace.com/djpiker

    PEACE!
     
  2. Fratanize

    Fratanize Keepin the jungle alive

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    checkin it now buddy,
    nice skankness. Like the bass, similar sounding bass to your exterminate bass. think it needs some crunchy drum fills to cut the track, refresh the catch. Maybe throw in the occasional whomp in the bass to keep it diverse. Would sound cool with some slices from an amen every so often, just dropped in.
    just suggestions mate. track is really smooth.
    respect
     
  3. SLow

    SLow Quadrospazzed life-glug

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    Yeah defo needs drum fills in there, switched up at the end of 8 bars and mabye a key change to a lower key and a farty sorta bass synth after 32....sounds good overall though, I like the structure of the 2nd drop. Big ups.
     
  4. P!ker

    P!ker Astrobass Recordingz HQ

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    Thanks for the feedback geezers.
    I will have a mess round with it later and see what i can do to spice it up a bit.
    PEACE!
     
  5. filtersweeperVC

    filtersweeperVC filtersweeper

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    I liked the intro, the timestretches etc. Sounded good when it came in too. I agree with the other, deffinitely add some crunchy drums to take it to the next level. Read that "how to make a beastly amen" and apply to techniques to your drum track. It will widden up the sound and make it sound harder. I think with that, you'll be off to the races.
    Good work
     
  6. P!ker

    P!ker Astrobass Recordingz HQ

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    Cheers man!
    I will have a read of that "how to make a beastly amen" i have not seen it before.
    I am definately gonna make this track better no matter how long it takes me.
    Thanks for listening
    PEACE!
     
  7. P!ker

    P!ker Astrobass Recordingz HQ

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    Nutek movement junglist

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    sickkkkk tune, i love it mate! dutty intro too, nice work (y)
     
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    Nutek movement junglist

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    just got to the second drop, awesome! pure excellence my good man!
     
  10. P!ker

    P!ker Astrobass Recordingz HQ

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    Cheers bruvva!
     
  11. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    sick tune man!!!
    bigup p!ker!!!!!
     
  12. davegreggs

    davegreggs New Member

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    i fink itz fukin mint man - just needs filin out a bit! :)
     
  13. P!ker

    P!ker Astrobass Recordingz HQ

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    Cheers SC!
    And thanks davegreggs, i am in the process of trying to make this sound phatter, so look out for an improved version soon.
    Thanks for listening
    PEACE!
     
  14. perspective

    perspective Sex Drugs & Sausage Rolls

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    agree with the others dude, totally sick tune just needs a bit extra oomph.

    love it though :D
     
  15. perspective

    perspective Sex Drugs & Sausage Rolls

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    also, what do you do your basslines with?

    loving the gunshots as well btw
     
  16. P!ker

    P!ker Astrobass Recordingz HQ

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    Yo thanks for listening man!
    I use Massive for wump bass and anything else i use z3ta+
    PEACE!
     
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    P!ker Astrobass Recordingz HQ

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    BRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRAP
     
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