first of basslines sick
Drums are a little weak though
i like the atmosphere
the change in bass line every four bars does get a bit old after a while but when the wobble starts that makes up for it
good track keep at it
Love the percussion, it fits really well. I'd say give your kick and snare a bit more life, perhaps layer the snare sample, if not a more harmonically rich sample. Other than that it seems to be fair, also love the atmospherics and the vocal.
Thats a nice tune mate,, all I would say is on about 1.26 I was expecting a bit of fast percussion to come in, some thin hi-hats, from a listeners point of view, some percussion from 1.26 to the breakdown,
easy mate... really feeling this one! would even like a copy to play out if your giving them out for promo, when its finished of course!?
Thhink this tune is pretty much there, just needs some work on the mix down... i think the drums are pretty decent, love the snare sound (cant figure which track they reminds me of?), its really the kick that is lacking i think?
only advice i can really add to it is somehow play on the atmospheric side to it, this tune is quite haunting, work with it... also, dont put a full track up on SC