New Jump up (ish) track from my self, feedback needed!!

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Dj Jammin, Mar 25, 2011.

  1. Dj Jammin

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    It's nice man, me likey. I think the drums could do with a bit more weight and depth to them. Maybe some more atmosphere/fx for the drop too.
     
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    Thanks mate :) anyone else??
     
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    first of basslines sick
    Drums are a little weak though
    i like the atmosphere
    the change in bass line every four bars does get a bit old after a while but when the wobble starts that makes up for it
    good track keep at it
     
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    Cheers mate! Gotta fatten up the drums I guess :)
     
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    I really like the high pitched bassline (if that is what it is :p). Im really into that sort of thing!

    Drums need some weight tho! Keep it up!
     
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    Cheers mate appreciate the feedback!!
     
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    Love the percussion, it fits really well. I'd say give your kick and snare a bit more life, perhaps layer the snare sample, if not a more harmonically rich sample. Other than that it seems to be fair, also love the atmospherics and the vocal.
     
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    Thanks chunky! :)
     
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    The high bassline is really sick! :)
     
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    Real cool bassline man! but i think ur snare needs some more punch
     
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    Thats a nice tune mate,, all I would say is on about 1.26 I was expecting a bit of fast percussion to come in, some thin hi-hats, from a listeners point of view, some percussion from 1.26 to the breakdown,

    big tune
     
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    u already know what to do...sick bassline
     
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    Thanks for all the feedback peepz!!
     
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    easy mate... really feeling this one! would even like a copy to play out if your giving them out for promo, when its finished of course!?

    Thhink this tune is pretty much there, just needs some work on the mix down... i think the drums are pretty decent, love the snare sound (cant figure which track they reminds me of?), its really the kick that is lacking i think?

    only advice i can really add to it is somehow play on the atmospheric side to it, this tune is quite haunting, work with it... also, dont put a full track up on SC :) (y)
     
  17. Dj Jammin

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    Yeah course, i'll pm you when i finish it. Let me know when you play it out and what reaction you get :D you can#t download of SC can you?
     
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    you cant download mate but ppl can rip it

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    and i like ur bassline mate, jsut beef up the drums. :)
     
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    you can DL from SC if you enable it... but if your sending a tune i'd recomend getting aim to do so, all the big names (and small names do so!)
     
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