NEW JUMP UP DEMO-TUNE!! FEEDBACK PLEASE! (soundcloud!!)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by naw_dj, Nov 20, 2009.

  1. naw_dj

    naw_dj New Member

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    a track i ve been doing this morning!
    tell me what you think about it, and whats wrong in there!
    thx a lot from barcelona! ;)

    http://soundcloud.com/nawdj/naw-dj-jump-up-desembre

    <object height="81" width="100%"> <param name="movie" value="http://player.soundcloud.com/player.swf?url=http%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Fnawdj%2Fnaw-dj-jump-up-desembre"></param> <param name="allowscriptaccess" value="always"></param> <embed allowscriptaccess="always" height="81" src="http://player.soundcloud.com/player.swf?url=http%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Fnawdj%2Fnaw-dj-jump-up-desembre" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" width="100%"></embed> </object> <span><a href="http://soundcloud.com/nawdj/naw-dj-jump-up-desembre">NAW DJ - JUMP UP DESEMBRE</a> by <a href="http://soundcloud.com/nawdj">nawdj</a></span>
     
  2. xevioso

    xevioso New Member

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    Doesn't particularly sound right to me. Maybe because the song is too slow for that style, or I think the synth doesn't sound...elegant enough? Like it's too simple or unrefined or something. Hard to put my finger on it... Just my two cents...
     
  3. jimjimjim

    jimjimjim oldskool

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    i like the drums and the bass but not too sure about the high synth. it kinda stands out a bit too much in the mix or somethin.

    i think its v good tho (strange cymbal at about 2.05 - freaked me out) :D
     
  4. naw_dj

    naw_dj New Member

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    thx mates
    yes the sinth is a shit
    and the notes that it do are too
    hehehe
    this next week i will work on it
    reupload there when i have something

    HAVE A NICE WEEKEND!
     
  5. Protoplasym

    Protoplasym Nuskool

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    The lead gets old fast... the Sub is nice and bubbly!

    The extra lead at 00:57 is a couple DB too loud imo.

    Love that fill at 00:31!


    Prod sounds really good... everything is nice and loud and crisp in my headphones! Imo, there needs to be a lot of work done on your main lead... the phasey one that you start the track with that is.