NEW JUMP UP DEMO-TUNE!! FEEDBACK PLEASE! (soundcloud!!)

[naw_dj]

a track i ve been doing this morning!
tell me what you think about it, and whats wrong in there!
thx a lot from barcelona!

http://soundcloud.com/nawdj/naw-dj-jump-up-desembre

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[xevioso]

Doesn't particularly sound right to me. Maybe because the song is too slow for that style, or I think the synth doesn't sound...elegant enough? Like it's too simple or unrefined or something. Hard to put my finger on it... Just my two cents...

 

[jimjimjim]

i like the drums and the bass but not too sure about the high synth. it kinda stands out a bit too much in the mix or somethin.

i think its v good tho (strange cymbal at about 2.05 - freaked me out)

 

[naw_dj]

thx mates
yes the sinth is a shit
and the notes that it do are too
hehehe
this next week i will work on it
reupload there when i have something

HAVE A NICE WEEKEND!

 

[Neural Tech]

The lead gets old fast... the Sub is nice and bubbly!

The extra lead at 00:57 is a couple DB too loud imo.

Love that fill at 00:31!


Prod sounds really good... everything is nice and loud and crisp in my headphones! Imo, there needs to be a lot of work done on your main lead... the phasey one that you start the track with that is.