new intelligent/ambient tune

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by charliemcp, Jun 18, 2008.

  1. charliemcp

    charliemcp i start fires

    Joined:
    Apr 3, 2008
    Messages:
    76
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    North Herts/Sheffield
    www.myspace.com/charliemcp

    not normally my thing, dunno wot inspired me to make it rele. anyways any feedback wuld be gd, feel free to add my space aswell! safe

    tunes called tropical paradise
     
  2. toxysweden

    toxysweden what do these knobs do?

    Joined:
    May 10, 2006
    Messages:
    95
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    sweden
    weres the sub?????

    edit: sorry my fault was listening to bitch hehehe
     
    Last edited: Jun 20, 2008
  3. Nutek

    Nutek movement junglist

    Joined:
    Apr 2, 2008
    Messages:
    4,051
    Likes Received:
    11
    Location:
    Hampshire
    interesting idea mate, too simplistic for me but the drums are nice, would like to see them in some jump up..
     
  4. Simm3r

    Simm3r Gonna shmoke a bowl

    Joined:
    Feb 29, 2008
    Messages:
    186
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    London
    sik tune man, i like the housey bass, but not too much of a fan of the startin melody though, but makes a nice contrast when it changes. the drums sound fine to me. big up
     
  5. logikz

    logikz I Am Not The King Staff Member

    Joined:
    Feb 8, 2002
    Messages:
    10,556
    Likes Received:
    2,520
    Location:
    www.easternpromiseaudio.com
    there is precisely nothing intelligent or ambient about this tune at all.
    the break certainly would fit perfectly in a jumup tune and the bass sound is pretty cool albeit very high pitched.
     
  6. Sammy Dexcell

    Sammy Dexcell Stop editing my profile Smarty!

    Joined:
    Oct 15, 2004
    Messages:
    2,091
    Likes Received:
    115
    Location:
    A place where the flowers grow
    gota agree wiv logiks on this one, good effort nonethelss
     
  7. Sammy_Dodger

    Sammy_Dodger Mr Ed

    Joined:
    May 19, 2008
    Messages:
    3,559
    Likes Received:
    127
    Location:
    Peckham
    hummmm good effort m8, but not really my kind of thing...not feeling the gash piano on the intro.
     
  8. dj revere

    dj revere Member

    Joined:
    Jun 14, 2005
    Messages:
    158
    Likes Received:
    0
    piano is too loud in the intro and doesn't flow enough for me, you need to sustain the notes between each note.
    drums are weak and way too far back in the mix
    with a decent mix down this is a proper early back in the days v-recordings sounding track for me
    also the mix is pretty weak and needs seriously tightened up

    get the mix sorted and you could be onto something here