New Here, and I brought a new tune with me! Criticize Please?

[M&B]

any criticism is welcome thanks

https://soundcloud.com/mind-body-1/origin-original-mix

 

[Norax]

Look at that, very solid so far. Now you just have to focus on getting some more details in there. The snare could be layered to be a tad snappier; good change-up of bass... could even happen a bit earlier. Definitely a really good track, enjoyed it!

 

[Tone1304]

pretty solid track, would even love to maybe try a remix on this