alright mate listening now.
1:10-1:15 i think u could do without that melody on the bassline, doesnt sound quite right. same with 1:32 - 1:40.
I like when the second bassline comes in sounds dirty, i think you could do with more background ambience in the background or some effects do fill out the track more, just the bassline and drums isnt enough.
Tbh thats all i can pick out i dnt like mate apart ffrom maybe a bit of variation in the main bassline would be good halfway between the breakdown or something. Add some more effects or background noises after the bass has kicked in, should sound better!
hope this helps!