NEW DNB TUNE CALLED "GO"

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by MARKLAR, Jun 6, 2009.

  1. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    new tune up havent made any dnb for a while so be kind!lol
    its quite different to my usual style i said im not gonna make jump up for a bit an i think ive managed that!:teeth:
    havent made a proper intro for it yet so its a bit shit.
    also myspace quality on this one isnt to good.
    all feedback is very much appreciated.
    http://www.myspace.com/djscdnb

    EDIT-if anyone can tell me wat kind of sub genre this would come under id like to no as im not to sure!haha
     
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  2. Nutek

    Nutek movement junglist

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    liking the idea man, drums could be a bit steppier and shuffly to fit with the bassline better

    but yeah, funky bassline
     
  3. *State

    *State Self confessed VW nut

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    :ditto:

    But i think there might be a little too much reverb on the snare?
     
  4. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    cheers man.
    im gonna work on the beats a bit more i think.
     
  5. Nutek

    Nutek movement junglist

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    sweet man :D
    good to see you back on some drum and bass ;)
     
  6. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    cheers for checkin.
    theres actually no reverb on the snare but i see wat u mean ive just shortened the length an i think thats sorted it out!

    @ nutek
    im gonna try an make a lot more dnb in the future but more techy kinda stuff but im not givin up the dubstep either!:D
     
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    *State Self confessed VW nut

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    Yeah go for it!

    Yeah i think a really fast attack and decay would help the snare no end. Quite a cool vibe going on tho :2thumbs:
     
  8. sati

    sati Code Monkey

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    hey man you should pitch the bassline down a bit till it sounds a bit more boss cuz it's almost there, then compliment it with some bigger drum sound.

    250hz and less tail on the snares so it doesn't sound as much like 80s drums. get some rides in there

    yeh will be sick
     
  9. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    cheers for checkin.
    ive already tryed pitchin the bass down an it doesnt sound good at all plus i quite like the high bit after the low stabs.
    ive changed to drums so they dont sound so 80s anymore!lol
    ive also layerd sum extra breaks on bits an added sum rides.lol
    ill upload it when ive got a good intro.
     
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    eXyZe !ONGELEGEN!

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    bass is nice. kick could be turned up a bit. Not really feeling the snare. Its too much "in ya face", a bit too loud in comparison to the other elements and doesnt fit very well in the mix. good luck!
     
  11. Mattix

    Mattix Sub Focus anyone?

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    Rude bass mate! Phat! wuh wuh wuh!!! :D
     
  12. djklimaxx

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    fukin luv it mate,your gonna be big
     
  13. subprime

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    Fuck man, leave the dubstep for a while and make sick tunes like this. You want to make some techy dnb, sweet. I'll be watching for it.
    That was good.
     
  14. dar kist

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    yea man sounds good, as said work on the beats a lil, kick just needs a lil more depth, and ditch the reveb on the snare, tighten up that shuffle, sick b line. can't wait to hear it when its done,
    im also working on a dnb track for the first time in like 9 months or sum shit
     
  15. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    cheers man ive sorted the kick out already i no wat u meant.
    im keepin the snare but ive shortened the length so its still got punch but nothing after!lol

    cheers mate i worked quite hard on this bass!lol
    glad its kinda payed off!
    cheers that means alot to me!
    cheers for checkin!
    im not gonna leave dubstep but i fink im gonna try and do tunes on rotation if u no wat i mean.

    cheers for checkin man.
    ive bin workin on the beats all day so they shud be ok!lol
    cant wait to here ur new shit man!:D
     
  16. chris getme

    chris getme Dub Logic

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    its missing a certain rolliness... nah mean?

    As has been said before a few breaks shud help with that. Or another hi hat part or something?
     
  17. MARKLAR

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    cheers for checkin ive stuck sum extra breaks an shit in there soundin alot better ill upload it when its finished,
     
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    yeah reup that new version. bline is really sick!

    sort out a sick intro. some dark pads, really slow buildup and then unleash that beast of a bassline. big!
     
  19. MARKLAR

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    cheers for checkin im thinkin of that for an intro!
     
  20. Stickyfingerz89

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    Nice little intro there, nice filtering. Fkin love the 'go' sample.
    Got a mad bass going on there but the kick can use some pump up and the snare needs more low cause you can hear it, but can't feel it you know what i mean?
    Got a nice little preview here m8, gimme me a sign when it's finished!