New dnb track 'skyline', feedback appreciated

[prettyherb]

Yeepz, i just uploaded some dnb on sc, skyline. Feel free to give some feedback on is cause' it's still a wip..

Enjoy listening

https://soundcloud.com/dub-iconics

grtz

 

[Side Effect]

Well dobe m8, sounds like camo & krooked (have u used the "numbers" drop at 1:05?)
There are a couple of thing to fix..
1. Sub: too low, give it more power
2. the break...sounds empty, layer another break or make it fat.
3. try to add a pad after the drop, or a soft white noise on the top...cover all the spectrum

hope this will help you

 

[prettyherb]

Well dobe m8, sounds like camo & krooked (have u used the "numbers" drop at 1:05?)
There are a couple of thing to fix..
1. Sub: too low, give it more power
2. the break...sounds empty, layer another break or make it fat.
3. try to add a pad after the drop, or a soft white noise on the top...cover all the spectrum

hope this will help you

well, i just like that synth noise, but i did make it myself.
For the sub, i tried to play it as loud as i can. when i go louder, is starts to overwhelm the rest.. How give it more power? i tried some distortion already.

Tnx for the advice man

 

[Side Effect]

well,

for sub i work in this way:
i use reason (imo..has the best sytnhs for smooth stuff)

subctractor, 2 oscillator, sine on the first, square (for a more deep/punchy sub) on second one.
a bit of saturation (a bit!) lowpass it at bout 80 hz and...enjoy your sub

DONT USE MASSIVE (i hate it for a simple sine too...)

 

[prettyherb]

well,

for sub i work in this way:
i use reason (imo..has the best sytnhs for smooth stuff)

subctractor, 2 oscillator, sine on the first, square (for a more deep/punchy sub) on second one.
a bit of saturation (a bit!) lowpass it at bout 80 hz and...enjoy your sub

DONT USE MASSIVE (i hate it for a simple sine too...)

ok man thnx for those tips I used to have reason but i'll try it with 3xosc or something on my fl

 

[Simply D.]

ok man thnx for those tips I used to have reason but i'll try it with 3xosc or something on my fl

3xOSC is perfect for simple basslines.

What i do for smooth bass on 3x:

1. Turn the 2nd-3rd osc off.
2. Make the first osc an inverted sine
3. Lowpass at ~80hz
4. Add Fruity Blood Overdrive and Fruity Bass Boost
5. Adjust to taste
6. EQ

Sounds good tho man ^_^

 

[prettyherb]

3xOSC is perfect for simple basslines.

What i do for smooth bass on 3x:

1. Turn the 2nd-3rd osc off.
2. Make the first osc an inverted sine
3. Lowpass at ~80hz
4. Add Fruity Blood Overdrive and Fruity Bass Boost
5. Adjust to taste
6. EQ

Sounds good tho man ^_^

Tnx for the advice mate