new dnb track featuring lil jon

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by partyonmarz, Aug 30, 2008.

  1. partyonmarz

    partyonmarz New Member

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    Fratanize Keepin the jungle alive

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    hello mate. First sample needs a little cleaning up. Good sample tho.
    Not keen on that repeating vocal. Drums are cool but need to be eqed up.
    Perhaps a drop into a deeper bassline and a break from the vocals.
    Certainly different mate.
    peace
     
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    partyonmarz New Member

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    thanks for the honest words
     
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    vickvega Mr. Blonde

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    intresting-really no significant break down -might want to vary some parts to get a drop
    sample in the beginnig does need cleaning-and main vocal sample is a bit loud -kinda drowns everything out
    your bass line was kinda in with everything else and not very defined
    not meaning to be harsh just honest
    keep at it bro
     
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    partyonmarz New Member

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    great feedback