hello mate. First sample needs a little cleaning up. Good sample tho.
Not keen on that repeating vocal. Drums are cool but need to be eqed up.
Perhaps a drop into a deeper bassline and a break from the vocals.
Certainly different mate.
intresting-really no significant break down -might want to vary some parts to get a drop
sample in the beginnig does need cleaning-and main vocal sample is a bit loud -kinda drowns everything out
your bass line was kinda in with everything else and not very defined
not meaning to be harsh just honest
keep at it bro