First thing that grabs me is that little string. Sounds wicked.
Also think it sound's more fitting in the second version.
To me, the first version sounds good, but stuck between ideas.
I prefer the second intro, without all the high hats, but i like the echoed synth in the first version just before the drop.
I'd love to hear that put into the second version.
Overall, prefer the bass on the second as well, more understated. rolling underneath the track.
Im not a music critique by any means, and would love to be able to give a better explanation of what i liked! But take from that what you will
