the hats in the beginning are too bright maybe dirty them up with a distortion/compressor and pull them back a bit. the snare would sound better fatter. the drum roll at 1:19 sounds out of place id take it out. the vocals are super dope. and the synths play with them nicely. id use a distortion on the bass to give it some more weight. i like the reverb snare in the background. at 1:52 id layer a heavier bass under it?
2:15 that bass is sick. and that call and response higher bass is right on but id still fatten up the main bass line... and maybe give it some lfos or play with the cut off
the kick, snare hi hats and tambs are too bright.
id compress the drums a little more and pull the percussion with the reverb back a little bit.
the mix sounds a little bright, like the kick and snare could be dirtier or have more weight.
great job on this.
kind of reminds me of what i love best about soundtracks from the 80s movies mixed with awesome dnb, especially the lead synth.
nice/hope this helped.