New Dark/minimal WIP, feedback would be really appreciated

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by B.unique, Aug 10, 2011.

  1. B.unique

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    general feedback, what needs to be changed etc, cheers
     
  2. Pixelscum

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    I like it very much! Nice and dark, atmospheric.
    If I were to change it I'd cutoff the bass even lower, and maybe leave the piano and beeps when the bass drops and let them come in later.
    Not too sure on the piano's part in the song, it adds something but doesn't feel right...
     
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    cheers mate, i think your right about cutting off the bass just to give it abit more low end... i want to add more mids in.. thats why im using the piano but it doesnt really fit the feel of the tune
     
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    agreed about the piano. Also the kick needs bringin up a bit in the mix seems like its sitting in the background too much. nice atmos and vocal sample
     
  5. horace111

    horace111 My name is Jago (HYQXYZ)

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    Wow man, this is great! :) as said before bring out the bass a little more, but I really love the overal atmosphere and progression of the track!