New dark DnB tune - "Storm"

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by dafo93, May 6, 2009.

  1. dafo93

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    i like the dark pad intro. dont really like the drop at around the minute mark but one thing i will say is that i'm bored of jump on ere and its refreshing to hear a different sort of track, its individual and i like it.

    the drums are a bit weak though and that rough saw around 2.45 is gash. other than that well done
     
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    Cheers mate - I'm definitely looking to improve though, I've only been producing since January 09. Thanks again
     
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    Sammy Dexcell Stop editing my profile Smarty!

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    THIS! man that was a spot on description of the tune an of my feelings towards the new talent section! big up!

    @daf its very good production for 5months bro keep at it!
     
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    Thanks mate :)
     
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    Yeah, try and bring the drums thru the mix for sure. Quite liked the bass, not too sure about the trancey elements.....maybe just cos I wasn't expecting it.
    Could be quite good with a bit of work. Definitely good to hear something a bit different tho. keep at it.
     
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    Will take that into account :) Thanks for the feedback
     
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    Yeah man i quite like it actually.

    Think that wobble trace bit needs to be more bassy (bit too much for me to handle as it is), and maybe perk the drums up a bit more.

    Sounding good though!
     
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    Cheers for the feedback :)
     
  10. Kibon

    Kibon Blaze It Down !

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    def like this , I really like the trancy sounds but like already said : make your drums sound stronger , it will make your tune sound a lot better ! I'm listening on earplugs so I can't really say much about the bass but it sounds good to me.. keep up the good work !
     
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    Zeal Ohm/C2D/Dark Asylum/Ennex

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    without trying to repeat whats been said about the drums, id concentrate on getting a solid kick and snare in there, then laying ur amen and whatever other breaks u have in there more subtly in the backgorund. Quite like the track its really moody. not my thing cos its real slow

    on the main amen, also sounds as tho it is badly rexed? Something definaltely not right about it, id check the quality of that break

    but since Jan u say ive been making? Good work man
     
  12. Dave Dexcell

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    i agree with zeal the amens are either sliced wrong or its a dodgy rex, i dont belive for a second you have been producing for 6months unless u have some one with u all the time that knows something lol

    good work bro i like the tempo and the overall feel of the track!