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dar kist

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like i said need links !!! lol will listen to both when you amend the mistake.

have a listen to my dub track, would love some advice,

on these forums dude, ya give feed back you get feed back ( some times anyway !! LOL)

peace fella
 

dar kist

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still not sure what tracks im suposed to listen to, so lets give them all ago

listening now......

SOUL BOOTLEG:

nice tune, got a good vibe,

nice eqing

maby just a little repetitive .

needs a break down or subink .

hold on there it is....nice one

still nice tune.

NEW DAWN:

nice one fella !!!

good sampling

maybe try use the sample in the main song a ll more

good vibes on this one aswell.

SPEED IT UP A BIT:

nice samples ,

good atmosphere on this track

oh..... nice sub bass on this track ,

nice one fella,

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i would work on the drums in general mate, try layering with a heavy snare, and a beefy kick or subing, to kick a bit more out of it, try changing your tracks up a bit, need to be a bit more interesting , dont get me wrong they are good just need a lil more.

peace dude,
 

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EAzy mate.
Listened to all three tracks. I think the first track had the smoothest flow to it. The second had the better drum pattern. The third was generally good too. I think all three tracks have the general bones to be great tracks, just that they all sound alittle thin.
Darkists advice on layering drums should be followed.
I personally thought all three tunes were a little too similar. They were all good, but sounded like remixes of each other. Its good when you discover a formula that works for you, but you shouldn't let it dictate the sound of all your records.
Good stuff mate.
peace
 
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