new dancefloor stuff

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by second opinion, Mar 24, 2008.

  1. second opinion

    second opinion bacon sarnies hmmmm

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  2. dar kist

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    like i said need links !!! lol will listen to both when you amend the mistake.

    have a listen to my dub track, would love some advice,

    on these forums dude, ya give feed back you get feed back ( some times anyway !! LOL)

    peace fella
     
  3. second opinion

    second opinion bacon sarnies hmmmm

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    dar kist KYRO

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    still not sure what tracks im suposed to listen to, so lets give them all ago

    listening now......

    SOUL BOOTLEG:

    nice tune, got a good vibe,

    nice eqing

    maby just a little repetitive .

    needs a break down or subink .

    hold on there it is....nice one

    still nice tune.

    NEW DAWN:

    nice one fella !!!

    good sampling

    maybe try use the sample in the main song a ll more

    good vibes on this one aswell.

    SPEED IT UP A BIT:

    nice samples ,

    good atmosphere on this track

    oh..... nice sub bass on this track ,

    nice one fella,

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    i would work on the drums in general mate, try layering with a heavy snare, and a beefy kick or subing, to kick a bit more out of it, try changing your tracks up a bit, need to be a bit more interesting , dont get me wrong they are good just need a lil more.

    peace dude,
     
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    Fratanize Keepin the jungle alive

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    EAzy mate.
    Listened to all three tracks. I think the first track had the smoothest flow to it. The second had the better drum pattern. The third was generally good too. I think all three tracks have the general bones to be great tracks, just that they all sound alittle thin.
    Darkists advice on layering drums should be followed.
    I personally thought all three tunes were a little too similar. They were all good, but sounded like remixes of each other. Its good when you discover a formula that works for you, but you shouldn't let it dictate the sound of all your records.
    Good stuff mate.
    peace
     
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    second opinion bacon sarnies hmmmm

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