Hey man its not my sort of DNB admittedly so dont take my advice too seriously but I'd say its severely lacking in the high end of the eq spectrum. Get either an extra synth with some melodies in it or some hi hats and bells or something. And try to variate the drum rhythm a bit more if possible.
like the intro - would like to hear a bit of build before the drop - bass sounds sound a bit varied in volume- def needs some drum variation- altho i like the drum line- tis clean sound you got there mang
maybe focus on some structure elements and variations and youll be on your way