New D&B Track, constructive critisizm please...

[DJDeeeNBee]

www.soundcloud.com/timdnbtunes
I know it's not mastered amazingly aswell but oh well...
enjoy

 

[miszt]

hi-freqz on the pads need a bit more control, and sumtimes (just for a moment at a time, on the swel i think) they are well out of tune with the rest of the track, are the intro pads panned? its a bit offputting and confusing. bassline feels like its havin trouble keeping up with the breaks to me, needs beefin u a bit, I was expecting it to drop hard after the 1st bar, i think it could do with a fat drop into those breaks, i'm bein harsh tho, nice balance of sounds, breaks are fat, tis a pretty sweet track, better mastering than most of my attempts lol. the 2nd breakdown seems unfinished to me?

 

[richie_stix]

https://soundcloud.com/timdnbtunes%2Ftimdnb-junglist-exploration

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mixdown seems a bit off to me, drums seem a bit wishy washy and all over the place, tighten them up and i think it might help that b-line come through... which imo could do with being a few notes higher

 

[DJDeeeNBee]

thankyou for that, i know what you mean, its kind of hard to master stuff though with a crappy netbook and headphones haha will improve it soon

 

[Neomind]

to me, this sounds killer, very oldschool, could do on a 90's rave for sure... too bad we can't travel in time... =(
:cries:

 

[DJDeeeNBee]

im only 16 but that styles the best

 

[luciduk]

this sounds good man only listening on headphones but its a nice use of the breaks!

 

[DJDeeeNBee]

Still don't know how to embed soundcloud on here, so once again www.soundcloud.com/timdnbtunes
Click on mix 2
Improved version i hope, and thanks luciduk, love chopping up a good amen

 

[DJDeeeNBee]

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