New Cringer track needs your critique!

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by cringer, Jul 29, 2003.

  1. cringer

    cringer Skull Farmer

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    hello all...just finished up this track and i hope you'll give it a listen and tell me what you think-
    Cringer - Melting Pot

    werd
     
  2. junglist soldie

    junglist soldie New Member

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    Good build up very fresh great vocal :mad: if the beat's and bass were loader this tune would be better, wicked change up's on the amen's though.
    good tune :banana:
     
  3. KidKut

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    Like the bassline and vocals, the above is about right, quality tune but you just need to work on some of the levels of the beats in places, some are a little quiet mainly where your buiding up.

    Tight though mate, i like it :)
     
  4. cringer

    cringer Skull Farmer

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    freeagent Almost 30

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    Not really into ragga, but the drum edit are great.
     
  6. Dj pfo

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    The drums are a little stale for me, and there's not really a whole lot going on in the song. Not much of a big fan of overly crazy amen breaks either, but it's well mastered and put together. I think you need some more... progressive changeups on the drums, especially in the intro. Maybe a little more melody too.
     
  7. mumblz

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    dope man..feelin it
    raggae vocals..ehh they r ok,can do w/out though:p
    tune is dope though..kool break
    242 is dope....amen can use a bost of the kick
    303 great edits brooooooo :) deff feelin these

    overall...i think its on of the better produced tunes i heard recently:) great drum edits
    mumzzzzzzzzzzzz