Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by ARTFX, Nov 7, 2011.
Hey guys come on, bumped!
Pretty nice man!
At first I was a little unsure about the melody but about 10 seconds in it started to sound good to me
Sounds nice when it gets going, the only thing I would suggest is maybe changing the drum sounds? But thats all persoanl preference. Keep working on it!
Hey mate, havnt seen you around for a while.
Not keen on the intro melody at all, but once it drops this is heavy! Look forward to hearing the finished product!
i think the intro riff is heavy personally, hits hard when it drops too, yeah man pretty serious dancefloor business, very nice
Did some work again, updated version in the first post!
The melody in the first 4 bars works really well. Then the chunk after that is kind of all over the place and feels random. I'd personally rather see that melody from the first 4 bars just go through the intro, with maybe a fill every 4th bar.
Everything else is really solid. The random'ish sounding intro melody is the only thing stopping me from completely loving this. I would totally drop this in a set with that cleaned up.
Might just be me but I also felt I lost my sense of timing at that little fill / re-drop around 1:16. I think the rhythm of the synth hits is off and it takes away from that little build up.
overall a big professional sound. the melody is a bit disorienting, but thats what beats and builds and risers and drops are for. definitely would like to hear that in it's entirety.
I like the groove of the track, especially when the drop hits and the "talking" bass starts doing its thing. The levels sound on point.
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