New choon. 'Plant Dome beef' By Psyrus

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Psyrus, Aug 24, 2009.

  1. Psyrus

    Psyrus Give it some bastard

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    what you think?
     
  2. Psyrus

    Psyrus Give it some bastard

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    'PLANET' I DO THAT EVERY TIME
     
  3. Protoplasym

    Protoplasym Nuskool

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    I thought it swung around quite nicely... but never really 'took off'. Solid overall though.
     
  4. lbolive

    lbolive New Member

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    The drums are phat :smash:, but the bass is coming through a bit weak. I'd replace the bass with a louder reese or something.
     
  5. Lucidproduction

    Lucidproduction i aint fraid of no ghosts

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    lots of reverb and resonation in your beat that needs to be cleaned up or shortend so it doesnt sound so wet, but maybe thats just my drum preference and u like that old school sound on ur drums!! haha. dont know;..


    bass is pretty badman tbh its cold. ur drums are a bit too jump up for me but the rest of ur sounds and bassline is sick
     
  6. Psyrus

    Psyrus Give it some bastard

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    Thanks for the feedback guys im gonna go back to this one i see what you mean about it not taking off. Ima make it take off. Hopefully.
     
  7. Zeal

    Zeal Ohm/C2D/Dark Asylum/Ennex

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    Too much reverb on ur drums

    drums would be quite stompy if you got them cleaner and snappier

    needs more atmos and fx in intro to keep it interesting

    sub needs to come up a bit in the drop

    the tunes got a vibe in there somewhere man

    defo needs a general clean up

    few more edits to keep it interesting too i would say

    not a bad effort man :)