DnB [Neurofunk]Ruben Pinto - Magnet

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Hey everyone , this is my latest Neuro track , this time I went for some chilly synth lines for the intro, followed by a nasty reese bass line drop , and overall I think this track has a good feeling to it , your feedback is greatly appreciated, 'cause I think this track's got potential to be signed!

https://soundcloud.com/r-ben-pinto/r-ben-pinto-diogo-tavares


I also don't know how to post the soundcloud widget! Some help would be awesome :D~

Nice productions everyone!
 
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your track sounds pretty good.
I really like the various neuro reese basses.
I feel the melody of one of the synths could be better, I'm talking about the synth that makes a sound at the same note every 8 beats.
overall mixdown is pretty good through my speakers.
 
bulletstorm said:
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your track sounds pretty good.
I really like the various neuro reese basses.
I feel the melody of one of the synths could be better, I'm talking about the synth that makes a sound at the same note every 8 beats.
overall mixdown is pretty good through my speakers.
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https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Fr-ben-pinto%2Fr-ben-pinto-diogo-tavares

Thanks a lot for your feedback ;D Yeah , that synth u mentioned is rather dull , I gotta fix it , but i'm amazed 'cause you liked it :D
 
this is a riddim ! i've checked your older tunes out & you're progression in the last year is fucking nuts.

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this is a riddim ! i've checked your older tunes out & you're progression in the last year is fucking nuts.
 
Ritual said:
this is a riddim ! i've checked your older tunes out & you're progression in the last year is fucking nuts.

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this is a riddim ! i've checked your older tunes out & you're progression in the last year is fucking nuts.
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Thanks a lot man ! I'm trying my best every time and it makes me happy someone realizes i'm improving :D

Yeah , this tune has a funky DROP! :D

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Fr-ben-pinto%2Fr-ben-pinto-diogo-tavares

check it out!:D
 
Great job mate, really digging the funk. Your bass mids are done really nicely and work with break great.

A couple gripes; firstly the respect vocals get pretty repetitive, maybe change them up a bit with pitch or FX. Secondly, the chord stab and other melodic stuff does get a bit stale too, so maybe try and change up the samples and pitch a bit. The bass could use a little kick up the ass too.

Sick tune, big up!
 
Mania said:
Great job mate, really digging the funk. Your bass mids are done really nicely and work with break great.

A couple gripes; firstly the respect vocals get pretty repetitive, maybe change them up a bit with pitch or FX. Secondly, the chord stab and other melodic stuff does get a bit stale too, so maybe try and change up the samples and pitch a bit. The bass could use a little kick up the ass too.

Sick tune, big up!
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Thanks a lot for your feedback mate :D
I do realize there's some tweaks needed in order to become a better track! But i'm glad people are liking the tune in a general way!
Thanks again ! :D
 
great tune, loving the basses, they're a bit all over the place but they still sit nicely, drums sound nice and clear, great work!
 
Nice and punchy drums : ), one thing I'd change though, is that you could have gone batshit crazy in the intro and introduced lots more crazy elements.
Billain does it best.
 
MisterApe said:
Nice and punchy drums : ), one thing I'd change though, is that you could have gone batshit crazy in the intro and introduced lots more crazy elements.
Billain does it best.
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Billain's been doing it for way longer than I have ahahaha xD
But thanks for the tip , I just went for a softer intro with not many elements attached, but thanks for complimenting my drums , I think they're spot on :P

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MisterApe said:
Nice and punchy drums : ), one thing I'd change though, is that you could have gone batshit crazy in the intro and introduced lots more crazy elements.
Billain does it best.
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Billain's been doing it for way longer than I have ahahaha xD
But thanks for the tip , I just went for a softer intro with not many elements attached, but thanks for complimenting my drums , I think they're spot on :P
 
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