Nemesis - Nicotine

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by nemes1s, Feb 20, 2013.

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    Hey guys, just a new tune I made today... any thoughts on this one? Would appreciate. Thanks ;)
     
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    I enjoyed it; the sub is excellent. I thought it was interesting how you only played a clip of a drum break, almost as an effect or incidental sample. That was pretty cool, but I did want to hear the break play out against the song at least once. The ambient/texture sounds were really well placed; the track was well-produced over all, as well. The only other issue I had was the breakdown lost energy in the middle; perhaps you could shorten it, or have a bit more going on in it or something.
     
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    Thanks man, I'll try and make it better ;)
     
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    @kdk, I've edited it "a little", listen to it once again please and tell me if you hear any difference ;)))
     
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    It's hard to say without the original, but it sounds like you changed the EQ or something on the drum sample... maybe tweaked the bass too or something? Again, I can't be sure... I do agree that it seems to fit in better. Around 2:40 I can hear the drum break clearly playing. I'm not sure if you added that, or just made it easier to hear?

    Well, anyway, it seems to be an improvement.
     
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    The only change is the drum loop after 2.30, I like it better this way.
    Hope I'll get some better tunes in the near future, stay locked and thx for the help ;)